(Stephen, thanks for your continuing help - I've tried again, as you see.)
And Lee, thanks very much in advance. I'm entirely new to haiku also.
I have a question about punctuation. Is it generally left off? Put in? Your choice?
Behind the house
apple branches break
bears grow fatter
cold sails
billow in the wind
a moonlit lake
Brown eyes follow me
tail wagging, mouth apant -
I prefer the cat.
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