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Unread 10-18-2008, 09:32 PM
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Lee, thank you so much. I just want to say a couple things about these.

(Cally, thanks.) In this one, I think the black wing is dipped into the moon's white paint, then brushing on the frost.

black wing
white moon
first frost

The fool is a clown with silly looking cherry tomatoes falling out of the eyes. On the kitschy side, a bit weird, I think.

cherry tomatoes
teardrops of
a lonely old fool

This one began with the third line like this: "without your flowers" - but I figured it was better to keep it simple -

muse
my vase is broken
without you

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