stephen
did I say $00.2? I meant AU $20.00 cash one nice orange plastic note
plus you crit every poem I ever write *grins*
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that aside on rereading your work I think you need to change
meadow in flower-- is too easy
to meadow mid season it not only tells you it is in full bloom but sets the time of year; can almost feel the heat, love the yellow happy face-- it must be yellow, the sun is out
meadow mid season
the dog returns with frisbee
happy face first
~~ Joan
[This message has been edited by Henrietta kelly (edited October 19, 2008).]
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