my rewrite with accent for the toilet-
dawns dunny dinner
little blister with big sister
way down in the dump
Lets raise up the anti
Full house flush lay down
Ace it with stoned face
people --
I think I’m getting false praise for Callys work "the old lady and the grasses one" I did a line change for her, my crap is still near the top of page 6 if anyone can bear to take a look that far back.
I am missing posts as well. And I hate missing reading anything in this thread
thanks-- henie
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