Hi Lee, if you have a chance and if they're not completely unpalatable, could you criticize these?
waiting for their friend
the midsummer moon to rise
dandelion clocks
O lovely stripper--
your skull-&-crossbone panties!
And almonds in bloom!
Daylight. Summer moon:
a wafer of muscovite
the sky shows through
Shock of love:
where the kitten bit
a welling red dot
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