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Originally posted by Cally Conan-Davies:
Lee,
Your thoughts make deep sense and help powerfully. I have my head on by-pass and am taking them in through the heart. I can feel the truth of what you say.
The 'nail gun' is a tremendous example. A wonderful example of synesthesia. I feel that nail of heat with each staccato. That is such a true experience. Wow. You are communicating the feel of haiku so well, and I am so grateful. A haiku snaps and floats.
I raise my wine glass to yours, Lee!
I wrote these this morning as a thank you and farewell gift to you.
honeyeaters
nip and dart
spring morning
autumn evening
burnt paper
lifts against the wind
Cally
edit back to say - So do I, Mary! I was going to say earlier that I feel exquisitely alive right now, and an extraordinary sense of reverence. It's like magic, or love.
Or both
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Cally, thank you for the kind words--entirely undeserved!
Your new haiku have a delightful bouyance! Wow! Well done!
Lee