Lee, I've revised a few yet again and have one new one. Any comment would be greatly appreciated. Thanks again for putting up with my repeated attempts. Your efforts in teaching and critting our work has been stellar! I've fallen in love with haiku!
Donna
thunderheads roil
prairie dust rises
to meet the rain
black curtain of clouds
the switchgrass twirls
then bows to the breeze
neighbors porch steps lined
with unmowed grass and dead leaves
flowers, cards and candles
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