Sam, what's happening here, you are starting to freak me out. This one is more rigidly an iambic doof doof machine that the last.
Who KNOWS where WORDS can TAKE a GIRL-
what PALaCES or HAUNted AILES?
What BETter WAY to CRUISE the WORLD
than TRAVel, PEN in HAND, for MILES?
kaCHOOF kaCHOOF kaCHOOF kaCHOOF.
Is this what's getting published now to represent metrical poetry? - Lord have mercy.
Yawn.
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Mark Allinson
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