I'll have to admit to being underwhelmed by this. It goes under the category of "nice enough" but is hardly the best poem I've read in a while, or even the best pantoum.
Looking at it from the "Mastery" angle, it does deal nicely enough with the mechanics of the pantoum, but then again, I've never tackled the form myself so I can't say how difficult I find that task. Probably should remedy that.
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