suggestions for Marion
Marion,
Wouldn't this be worse if your last line were
For love I'd gladly give my wife.
ps. One typo is bad, but three would be so much worse.
For Love
Love's what sets your heart on fire,
It's song is like a ghostly choir.
But though Love's ways are dark and dire,
Love's all that human hearts desire.
Love cuts you like a kitchen knife,
With endless sorrow Love is rife,
But though it's full of pain and strife,
For love I'd glady give my life.[/quote]
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