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Unread 10-14-2019, 04:24 PM
John Isbell John Isbell is offline
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Hi Matt,

I like it. I think you could call it "Another Name for Fog" if you liked. I'd make the last sentence two sentences, with a period after him, and I'm not a big fan of nausea claws as a phrase. It also kind of sticks out here.

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John
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