Rick,
I find this painting's design quite dynamic, especially the use of color, with the more neutral colors in the foreground zigzagging through the middle ground through the typewriter, wine bottle and the globe to the top of the picture plane. The copper French horns and the wall paper are good. The blue vase balances nicely with the globe.
I wonder if its possible to tone down the brightness of the yellow object on the left hand side as it draws attention from the movement of the painting? I love the complexity of the painting. That yellow might be a touch out of place.
Beautiful--very impressed by this!
Katherine
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