Thanks very much, Martin; yes, it's interesting about Pluto and 'Merc'.
The Speccie... do you mean
The Spectator? My mum used to subscribe to that; I think she just reads the
Literary Review nowadays. Recently she had a letter published in the latter, about bad word-breaks. Unfortunately, in the same issue I found 'Fontaineb-leau' :-/
Thanks for your suggestion re. line 8. What do you think of an en dash following 'scrap' and then 'I got rocks an' big ridges an' t'ings'? I'd like to keep 'I got rocks' as it reminds me of 'rocks that I got' (J-Lo). And thanks also for '
zippy' :-)