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Unread 07-19-2019, 10:19 PM
Vera Ignatowitsch Vera Ignatowitsch is offline
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Dark but fun, Jim.

The last stanza, indicating that the skeleton's fun is about to begin, throws me a bit, as it seems they've been having some fun already.

Perhaps:

The cupboard's open, and there's no doubt
they're cavorting our skeleton kin.
Each year they are easier to let out,
and harder to get back in.

Best,
Vera
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