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Unread 05-21-2001, 11:57 AM
Jan D. Hodge Jan D. Hodge is offline
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Quote:
Originally posted by Carol Taylor:
God forgive your departed servant,
condescending and pompous and arrogant.
And help the rest of us that we might
forgive him the sin of being right.

Carol
Love the idea, but thought I'd nudge the rhythm a bit; hope you don't mind.


God, forgive your servant--insolent,
condescending, pompous, arrogant.
And help the rest of us so that we might
forgive him for the sin of being right.


Cheers,
Jan
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