I like the theme of "fallen majesty" among Americana.
The language is charged and fun.
I think I would prefer it if you took out the period and went with:
Autumn reveals it all
goes according to plan.
You lose me in the first three lines of the last stanza:
Pressure-sensitive and dismal;
is her screen dawn’s
last dance or dismissal?
The fragments in the first line are too much for me, and I don't know what the next two lines are saying.