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Unread 07-15-2019, 05:45 PM
John Isbell John Isbell is offline
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Hi Allen,

Maybe stutter for flutter, if you want similar sonics? I'm not now equipped to judge your Englishing, but what you have in English reads very nicely to me, for this famous poem. My one nit would be in S2 where you have two two-syllable line endings follow one another, and the ear (or my ear) is disappointed.

Cheers,
John
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