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Unread 07-18-2019, 08:49 AM
Jake Sheff Jake Sheff is offline
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James,

Appreciate the read and comments. Thank you giving me some things to think about. I'm also on the fence about "my" at the end, and "greatest."

John / Ashley,

I appreciate your feedback, getting insight into the effect the poem has on you. It's certainly true that "you can't please them all." I'm not sure it's a good idea for someone to try. I appreciate seeing why/where/how this piece might have failed so I can try something different in the future.

Jake
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