Thread: In Vino Veritas
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Unread 07-19-2019, 12:16 PM
Jim Hayes Jim Hayes is offline
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Thank you John. This is a rewrite of something I wrote a few years back under the title of Aprez Dinner which maybe was a better, or at least fresher, title.
That ended;

The closet is open, without a doubt
which means that our skeleton kin
( for all they are easier to let out)
are harder to push back in.


I wasn’t particularly happy with the ending, it’s not our ‘skeleton kin’ that are let out , so I’ve been looking for an improvement, and I’m still not sure if I’ve got it.

All best
Jim
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