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Unread 09-03-2010, 06:11 AM
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Martin,

That's brilliant! I think you've managed to include absolutely everything there is to say about a cowboy.
Pity ah 'aint the jur-dge, son.

Popped back to say that I think it would be even better if you lose the capital letters at the beginning of the lines you've enjambed. (Makes it flow better and is much easier to read IMO.)

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