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Unread 05-08-2022, 06:07 PM
Jim Moonan Jim Moonan is offline
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Beautifully expressed.You've slashed through the thick brushstrokes and carved out a birdsong... The lineation and slashes make for a different poem each time I read it. I imagined myself as a Shakespearean actor and read it aloud and again, it sounded like birdsong.

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