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Unread 07-22-2019, 10:24 AM
Mark McDonnell Mark McDonnell is offline
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Hey Jake,

Very quickly.

I finished my last crit of your previous poem saying I'd like to see what happens when you try something quieter and less flashy. I'm not claiming inspiration (ha) but this is it. My favourite of yours so far. Which isn't to say you shouldn't keep doing the other things you do.

Nice one.
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