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Unread 12-13-2007, 06:32 PM
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What the first draft might have looked like:

I'll be gone by Christmas.
You said I should go.
Slippery ice is heaven's price
For praying for fresh snow.

Christmas Eve I will be
Having fun, my dear.
I'll be gone by Christmas,
And glad you're staying here.
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