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Unread 08-02-2019, 02:14 PM
John Isbell John Isbell is offline
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Hi Susan,

As always, a fine rendering. I have three nits of varying importance. Id love it if you could keep Rilkes end stops. I find l3 a bit awkward metrically. And Id prefer vanishing Daguerreotype to disappearing photograph, its closer to the German.

Cheers,
John
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