Hello,
If you could answer the following it would help me a lot.
The criticism of the following is quite predictable.
Oooh, my poor orchid.
Poor MyTho,
river boats scorched on their pretty prows
with the shadows of four deep Eagles.
I would expect the word “deep” to be objected to: Eagles can not be deep, etc. But I am constantly drawn to a use of such unreal phrasings.
Also, I would like to see an eagle clinching its teeth, or raising its feather cuffed fist.
How can I justify this?
Thanks, Ted
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