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04-09-2003, 12:00 AM
A. E. Stallings
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Looks quite masterful to me. (Maybe a bit "Frost-y" with all those great monosyllables.) I love "flood will out" and the "race" pun at the end. Can't think of anything I'd tweak, really. I have the feeling I've come across this somewhere before.
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