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Unread 01-07-2024, 10:49 PM
Bill Dyes Bill Dyes is offline
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ABUSE (revision 2)

Iris strictly frame the driveway except
his car returns careless as wind and rain
pounding the blossoms from tall and erect
to no louder than a mute yellow stain.



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Iris strictly frame the driveway except
his car returns, wind and a pounding rain
bend the blossoms far from tall and erect
and no louder than a mute yellow stain.

Last edited by Bill Dyes; 01-13-2024 at 06:50 AM.
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