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Unread 08-24-2019, 11:06 PM
Susan McLean Susan McLean is offline
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John, I have tried rewording the English to get the subjunctives back in, though to do so I had to use "lest," a word I usually avoid because of its old-fashioned flavor. Let me know whether you think the new ending is an improvement or not. I appreciate your other comments on the changes I had made.

Susan
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