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Unread 07-16-2019, 07:52 PM
Jim Moonan Jim Moonan is offline
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So much to linguistically savor, as always.
You hooked me at S1L2,3 with the two-sided use of "like".

It has slight shades of “Big Fish” (a Tim Burton movie).

I don’t know that you need both Todds in S4. You could do away with the second one, I think, and just use pronoun.

Much enjoyed.
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