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Unread 07-29-2019, 08:44 AM
Aaron Poochigian Aaron Poochigian is offline
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I have revised:

They strike the starboard engine
first, then the port, and most assuredly
he will be crashing. He can see Times Square
(Madame Tussauds, those giant TV screens),
then he can see what must be Bryant Park
(Gingkos and maples, various lamplit greens),
then everything goes permanently dark.

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They strike the starboard engine
first, then the port, and he will certainly
be crashing. He can see, Oh God, Times Square
(Madame Tussauds, those giant TV screens),
then he can see what must be Bryant Park
(Gingkos and maples, various lamplit greens),
then everything goes permanently dark.
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