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Unread 08-17-2019, 02:23 AM
John Isbell John Isbell is offline
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Hi Susan,

More fine work. Three small nits: Iíd say whatís black and cold, since itís Kalte not Kaelte; Iíd maybe use crept for kroch; and Iíd put a comma after hood. Thatís it on first read.

Cheers,
John
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