This is very interesting, Ross. My only nit is that I find the jagged quality of the white and yellow lines distracting, especially between the little girl's legs and at the point where the blue man and the black, white and grey man's hips almost meet. The same jagged edge happens with the black lines but it doesn't distract so much. I don't get the feeling the roughness was intended but accepted. My mind wants them to either be smoother by use of anti-aliasing or else go all-out and break up into a background texture. This is just my personal taste, of course.
Your choice of colors is lovely and has nice energy, rhythm and balance.
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