Fun use of rhyme, Mark! I was glad to read it.
[Edited 18 February 2022 to add, for the benefit of anyone who might not be familiar with the venue and thus might be tempted to submit work there:
The site that published the poem in the original post is a white supremacist hell hole. They have published numerous examples of praise poems for police brutality against people of color, specifically Black people, along with sneers at the Chinese which they insist are not racist because they only hate the Chinese Communist Party, not all Chinese, even if those same sneers might still fan hatred of my American-born Chinese husband, my children, and my in-laws. Be sure to check out other examples of work that this group is publishing when you are deciding if you would be comfortable having your own work support this venue.]
Last edited by Julie Steiner; 02-18-2022 at 02:45 PM.
Reason: Caveat about the venue added for posterity
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