I only came upon the last poem, Equipose, I noticed in that the poet changed the wording slightly, and you could discern a slight pause, as if subconsciously the flow of the poem had prompted the change rather than it being a thought out decision. Others have noticed a change in another poem, this often happens I think, the spoken word changes what is written.
I love hearing the voice behind the words, especially in an accent so unfamiliar to me.
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