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03-24-2003, 08:22 AM
Tim Murphy
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I'm pleased to see Tom Pickering's eloquent praise for this. I stumbled over the ending, but Tom has zeroed in on that taxi line. Looking at it afresh, I think the first quatrain could be profitably dropped. A ten liner to die for...or with.
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