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Sonnet #3 - apartment
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04-28-2012, 09:41 AM
Susan McLean
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I like the enjambment on this one and how it affects the flow of the poem. That rushing quality ties it both to the ocean and to the feelings of love. The images are inventive, and there is a turn at the end toward a quieter kind of peace.
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