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Unread 01-18-2024, 06:27 PM
Joe Crocker Joe Crocker is offline
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This is strong and dense, and keeps calling me back. It has the feel, to me of Eliot’s “The Family Reunion”, with the italic sections being spoken by the chorus or the furies. When I’m unsure of the meaning, the solid metrics and the rhymes really help me reach for the hook at the end, to swing me on to the next line. It is satisfying. And grim.
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