Thanks Jayne. Suzou is a town a little west of the enormous city of Shanghai. I do have difficulties using my keyboard, so I am grateful for the slack you cut me in placement. I will try to find the "rules" which I did not remember from years ago when I used to hang out here. See archives for some of my best back then: Homeric Simile, and Caraval, for examples.
You have been most kind to me, and I appreciate it greatly.
Wiley
PS I now write one poem a day as therapy for the brain aspects of Parkinson's syndrome. It seems to help.
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