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Unread 07-04-2019, 09:14 AM
Jim Moonan Jim Moonan is offline
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There is something of a surfer-dude/Valley Girl mentality to the first couplet. What about "Hello-o!" (not sure of the spelling -- accent on the second syllable) instead of Yoohoo? Or "Knock-knock" (no that doesn't work : )
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