Fliss, do "smell" and "gal" rhyme in your neck of the woods? They don't in mine. Any number of tweaks possible, such as
There was an Old Man with a nose,
Who said, "If you choose to suppose
That I use it to smell,
You have not chosen well
For the truth is, I use it to pose."
I like your fifth line, but if you want to be raunchier in the great limerick tradition, how about "For I use it to pick and to pose"?
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