Originally Posted by Rick Mullin
I love the idea of the sonnet--the chance we are constantly give to break from the anxiety of existence and the difficulty we have taking advantage of it. Once into it, it's very effective.
Well put, Rick. Plus the poem's idea of Time. I don't mind not knowing who "somebody" is - seems clear it's the N by the end of the poem. I think the original version was a little too slapdash. Rev. 1 was a little too neat. But Rev. 2 is getting there.