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Originally Posted by A. Baez
I’ll consider it, but the current phrasing did seem an accurate representation of the reality upon which this poem was based.
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I hear it as a cheer breaking into a quiet poem. You’ve further emphasized the contrast with line spaces, so I can tell it’s deliberate, and the trueness of it is all that matters.
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Originally Posted by A. Baez
You mean in its last sentence? I don’t know. I pick up influences all over!
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“Nothing Gold Can Stay.”