Thread: Martial, V.81
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Unread 06-10-2019, 06:16 PM
Andrew Szilvasy Andrew Szilvasy is offline
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Lot's to think about here.

I'm glad the base of this is working.

Aaron, Matt, Roger, Martin: thanks for your feedback. I took Martin's "your" in L1 and I'm considering the possibility of shrinking it to a heroic couplet. It's either as it stands now, or a couplet without "now, Dave"

Thanks again y'all.
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