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Unread 08-08-2001, 02:20 PM
Terese Coe Terese Coe is offline
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Hi Jan!

Thanks for helping me remember how to count!

I've a solution to all your (and my) problems already:

Yeatsian seances! Then what to do with "Clairaudient"? Such a lovely word, but "Discarnate" might do. I still find those hyphenated-word wrap-arounds annoying, Founding Fathers or no. We're all entitled to a peccadillo now and again, no?

It's all one sentence: it has a subject and a verb. If you really want to be a stickler for grammar, I'll change the last comma to a dash. So there. I like the way the comma looks, I confess. If I added an "s" to "board," it wouldn't sound as good aloud. Thanks for all your attention to the detail and for reading, Jan.

Psychic Phenomena

Psychic phenomena,
Tarot and ouija board,
Yeatsian seances,
Discarnate raps

Metempsychosis or
Metagalactical,
Hit-or-miss cryptograph,
Death overlaps.

Terese


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