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Unread 11-08-2017, 04:18 PM
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Oh, that's a good point, Aaron. Would I like the poem better if the diction were less fusty? Hmmm. I'd have to see the new poem. As it is, I do think conceptually it's a sharp, concise assessment of WS, and I really like the last two lines (and particularly the last).
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