Joe - I love Bob Dylan's response. There's something about the false eyelashes that turns the image from half-real to real. I'll have to listen to that tonight.
RCL - thank-you so much for joining the game! Your poems are clever and funny. I am quite genuinely in awe of anyone who can manage to dash off witty metrical poetry so quickly. The end is brilliant -and the 'darts for hearts'. That's a whole other image in itself although I'll let someone else jump in to that one (I'm going to have a go at the Route 66 one though)
Ann - yours made me spit out my tea laughing. I love the range of unappetising possibilities, and 'bastards with impermanent intent', and the end is wonderful.
Sarah-Jane
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