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Old 05-29-2018, 01:45 AM
Andrew Frisardi Andrew Frisardi is offline
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You're right, Martin. I've been spacing out on the verb tenses there. It's now fixed, following your suggestions. Thanks for that.

For the tough line 5, I've gone with "storm or change of fate," liking the distant rhyme with "great" in line 1.
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