[Duncan Gillies MacLaurin]

Alicia has just posted the start of a Canto of hers here. Wonderful stuff!

Duncan

PS Dear Mod, please correct my title!

[Rob Wright]

Thank you Duncan! Great work. Funny as well (darkly).

Title corrected.

RobW

[Quincy Lehr]

Not entirely sure about the punning ending--"Bull" for "bull$#!t has mythological resonance but loses the important explosive power of the actual swear word. But that's a quibble in a section of a poem that indicates a new, fruitful direction for Alicia.

[Andrew Frisardi]

The "Bull" at the end is a clever pun, imo, and added to the force of the ending.

I greatly enjoyed this, and could easily have gone on for more of it.

[Allen Tice]

This is much more clever than the law allows.

I luv it! Snarky, full of good stuff (like Porphyrius the Charioteer [he's only implicit, though]). La la. No need for imbecilic coprolalia.

[Quincy Lehr]

Originally Posted by Allen Tice

No need for imbecilic coprolalia.

I love a gratuitous insult in the afternoon!