Dear mignon,
Well, there's an attached image and the link leads to a beautiful portrait. I don't really know how to critique art, but I can say I love the vibrant colours and the shaping of the swan. The neck is particularly good and I like the elegant closed eye. Is that a dandelion clock on the left, or maybe a representation of the moon? Either way, it's an appealing little addition here.
I had another photo published by Pittville Swans & Friends (Facebook) yesterday, showing George and his children on the banks of Lower Lake,
here :-) :>) (I just joined flickr)
Best wishes,
Fliss