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Unread 09-23-2014, 02:08 PM
Susan McLean Susan McLean is offline
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Bloom-dwelling bee, why are you nuzzling the skin
of Heliodora, deserting the blossoms of spring?
Is it to show that she has something sweet and unbearable,
always transfixing the heart, like Desire with his sting?
Yes, I suppose that’s your message. Ah, friend to the lover,
go back now. If that’s what you’re saying, I’ve known it forever.

Last edited by Susan McLean; 09-24-2014 at 11:42 AM. Reason: changed "Oh" in L5 to "Ah"
 

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